going to Shanghai U for graduate study is a good idea given that u may not be able to find any OK job anywhere in China. （通过）
most CQ girls will become relatively prettier in Shanghai （也许不够 idiomatic 但是大家明白所要表达的意思）
when u do not have any card to play, u may have to consider this is ur last card although u are not willing to do so （有点累赘， consider 得用发不正确，但大家明白所要表达的意思。也许 用 consider this your only chance or accept that this is your only chance 更好。u are not willing to 跟前面的 may have to 不配，也许 may not be willing to 更好。）
we have almost 30 girls from this English corner to Shanghai and some already have BFs who are PhD students in promising fields with great future
（we have: there have been
to shanghai and some: who have gone to shanghai and some of whom
have BFs: met BFs )
Of course the best for girls is to be independent women, however, with the job market at its 60 yr low, being independent is next to impossible for someone who does not have any card to play.
(the best for girls: the best option for girls
independt women: women 跟前面的 girls 不配
however: 用法不对；该用 nonetheless 之类）
