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作者：rainbow6 在 海归商务 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
I just want to say a few more to 校长.
I can tell that 校长 is on the cross road. You were confused and wondered what was the best way to continue. Well, Let us thinking this way. With your strong real-life experiences and huge information resources, you should 游刃有余 in writing it, what is the current 瓶颈 problem? I think that you gradually lost your initial vision after these years. What is the 人物定位 for Bob Sun?
We do NOT expect you writing something like 三毛 or 琼瑶, in your novel, you should show us “侠” other than “情”. Don’t you think Bob Sun is 现代版大侠. We also do not expect to see “高, 大, 全” from Bob Sun, he is human being, he also can make mistakes. But if you can show 侠 from him and his friends in the some tragedy events, it would be 到位. You already tried some in the first part of this novel, hope you 再接再厉. Of course, Bob Sun also needs love, but we should use 侠 rather than 情 vision to write.
Please write Chinese 侠 on your desk and think about it, I believe that you will 悟 from it.
Rainbow
作者：rainbow6 在 海归商务 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
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 通知：《回 国 训 火 记》第二十八集：《星雨心愿、情长梦短》（上）已经发表！ -- 安普若 - (1381 Byte) 2010-2-20 周六, 14:20 (90889 reads) - 写得真好 -- lldd - (48 Byte) 2010-10-30 周六, 12:05 (3281 reads)
- 静待校长更新 -- btwrc - (6 Byte) 2010-5-17 周一, 01:32 (3348 reads)
- 继续期待 -- pp9088 - (135 Byte) 2010-3-12 周五, 02:00 (3525 reads)
- 我这爆脾气啊 -- pp9088 - (55 Byte) 2010-3-10 周三, 11:39 (3648 reads)
- -- -- dmajor - (0 Byte) 2010-3-03 周三, 14:00 (3351 reads)
- 再进一言 给校长大侠 -- rainbow6 - (1014 Byte) 2010-2-24 周三, 02:24 (4536 reads)
- 一个小错 -- mistystar - (95 Byte) 2010-2-23 周二, 22:29 (3701 reads)
- 是的。太久了。 -- 安普若 - (96 Byte) 2010-2-24 周三, 01:31 (3717 reads)
- 找到错误啦！！ -- joe.tang - (208 Byte) 2010-2-21 周日, 13:31 (4031 reads)
- 来了，看这里 -- 安普若 - (96 Byte) 2010-2-21 周日, 16:33 (4381 reads)
- 顶 -- 70s - (0 Byte) 2010-2-20 周六, 23:25 (3655 reads)
- 地板。 -- 上校 - (3 Byte) 2010-2-20 周六, 14:34 (3798 reads)
- 校长这战线拉的长的， -- 上校 - (49 Byte) 2010-2-20 周六, 14:36 (3766 reads)
- 挑错 -- 上校 - (224 Byte) 2010-2-20 周六, 15:37 (3677 reads)
- 板凳！ -- 勤劳 - (0 Byte) 2010-2-20 周六, 14:32 (3884 reads)
- 找错： -- 勤劳 - (36 Byte) 2010-2-20 周六, 14:51 (3925 reads)
- 你看看这个图片 -- 安普若 - (248 Byte) 2010-2-20 周六, 15:01 (4477 reads)
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