Jim, how are you doing? I'm the Chinese anchorman you met last year at the Yale CEO Summit.
【评】芮主播不懂写简单英文信开头的惯例；自我介绍也是不地道，不到位。
We talked about why Starbucks should move its shop out of the Forbidden City.
【评】时态运用不准确
And I really appreciated it when you told me you yourself were not in favor of that.
【评】这句话最搞：“you yourself”使用的莫名其妙；句首连接词的使用也不到位。
Am curious to know if you have a plan to have it removed. It's still there. Did your Chinese partner agree with you ?
【评】这里的被动语态也不是最好用法。而且语义上缺乏商业礼貌。
All the best.
【原文】
Jim, how are you doing? I'm the Chinese anchorman you met last year at the Yale CEO Summit. We talked about why Starbucks should move its shop out of the Forbidden City. And I really appreciated it when you told me you yourself were not in favor of that. Am curious to know if you have a plan to have it removed. It's still there. Did your Chinese partner agree with you ?
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